Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
There is controversy over whether a country should host an international sports event or not. Some people believe it is good a choice while others think it is bad.
On the one hand, organixing an international sports event can bring the country numerous benefits. Initially, when a big sports event takes place in one country, it may help attract many tourists. Millions of people from every nation in the world may come to join the event. Therefore, the country can earn a huge amount of profit. Besides, becoming the host of an international sports is a good chance to advertise the country. The interesting information and beautiful images of the host country may show up on the TV or other social media regularly, which can easily make an impression on the watchers and they will want to visit this country one day. For example, in the World Cup 2020, many breath-taking pictures of tourist attraction in Russia can be seen everywhere to display the country's beauty and attract more tourist.
On the other hand, hosting an international sports event still have some drawbacks. One of them is that it is overload for some countries to prepare for an international event because of it stict requirements and high cost. In addition, the number of tourists come to attend the event may affect habitants' daily life. For example, they have to suffer from noise pollution from many group people on the streets all day or sometimes, face up with the rapidly increasing rate of crimes.
From my point of view, being a host of an international sports event has both pros and cons. Therefore, the final decision depends on each country's budget and condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89007092199 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72527131996 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9302669577 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399395091885 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140985527655 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107363418559 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282943886838 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118114962835 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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