6.12.2014: Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A section of society thinks the horizontal city is the best area to live in, while others believe that vertical urban is the people’s preference today. Although horizontal can brings various benefits, I still believe that high-rise cities are beneficial to both individuals and the environment.
On the one hand, there are several reasons explaining building houses on a wider area of land influences our lives. The first reason relates to the large space and the freedom, you can construct your house on larger plots as well as own a garden and a garage that you need not pay a parking fee. You can also do whatever you want and no one can see the activities of your life. Furthermore, living in horizontal areas is safer for inhabitants when some emergencies may occur. For instance, if the fire happens and quickly spread, you and your partners can swiftly escape from the danger. This is because its height is not tall, and not many people live in so it does not take much time to run and take important things.
On the other hand, there are various reasons why I still believe living in a vertical city is the best choice. Firstly, a tall city can provide homes to hundreds of families in the same structure so that there are more spaces for public activities such as hospitals, and parks. It also tackles the serious global issues called overpopulation and the shortage of accommodation. In addition, if all amenities are provided within an apartment, you will not need to take out your car for every little thing. Therefore, burning fossil fuels and unsustainable energy reduces, and little smoke being harmful to our environment is emitted.
To sum up, while living in a horizontal city does have some benefits, it seems to me that the advantages of living in a city with skyscrapers make living in a vertical city the better choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...eference today. Although horizontal can brings various benefits, I still believe that ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in a vertical city the better choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.790625 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6478156534 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565625 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1832143491 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295413608875 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947803157189 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117947929974 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210301533104 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115635086115 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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