some people think it would be good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good paren. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? describe the skills a person need to be a good parent.
Many believe that it will be a tremendous idea to educate all young students on how to be a good parent. Although, it is a controversial argument that either school should teach this to their students or not, but personally I support people's opinion. However, in this following, I am going to light on my view and describe the talent or skills that a parent need to have for being a good parent.
To begin with, there are two main benefits that I assume if schools start teaching how to be a good parent. First of all, if a school starts decorating a students then he will become an adequate parent in future who will get to know the value of education. He will make his children educated and a taught person always knows how to elevate a nation. Every country that is developed today is because of education and its amplification.
Another reason to support this view is, these well-taught young persons will make their future children human who have humanity. Humanity is fundamental to our community. If a student or children know about the importance of relationship then he or she will admire this. Owing to which, it will bring benignant for a country.
On the other hand, to become a good parent, you should have some skills. The first and foremost talent that you need to have is education. An educated person can make their children educate as because they know the true value of it. Secondly, it requires to forbearing. A patient person can deal with children as you children tend to naughty.
In conclusion, I once again reaffirm my side as supporting peoples believe which is, schools should educate their students on how to be a good parent as well as other curriculum.
- All students ought to study art and music in school To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Artists need certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity Some people think that artist should have total to express any thoughts and ideas To what extant do you agree or disagree 67
- Sports like sky diving and skiing are dangerous and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- These days internet is accessible to children easily Is this a positive or negative development 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...corating a students then he will become a adequate parent in future who will get ...
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Line 6, column 332, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
... deal with children as you children are tend to naughty. In conclusion, I once ag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70469798658 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63500394682 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51677852349 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6998028481 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4705882353 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354525360764 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109580589717 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960030672906 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21226246584 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122735064135 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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