Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
For improving the human well-being, the education plays an intrinsic role. People have some inconclusive debate about what would be the major objective of an educational institution. While some individuals opine that the school or educational authorities should mould their tutees as a responsible and productive member of community, I believe that they should also assist the children to grow as an individual.
Commenting with the most salient and predominent factor, preparing juveniles for better employment not only for their livelihood but also for their contribution in the global economy as well. In other words, if young people are bestowed marketing based lectures and professional environment in their compus, it would Create the fundamental virtues to be proficient in any sector. Therefore, the students would be equiped with vast knowledge and skills that are required in order to get job at an learly age. Thus, having all virtues, the children can easily grasp opportunities in the foreseeable future.
However, developing the personality would give the sense of satisfication or content to the young ones. Instead of it, I accord that it is necessary to focus on cognitive development and improvement of interpersonal skills of the human beings so that they can be able to interact effectively. Apart from it, many other skills, such as decision-making, reasoning abillity, should be improved in order to wide horizen and scenario of young person. For an instance, politeness, punctuality and determination are vital qualities of in successful person, which can be learnt from classrooms as there abilities benefit youngers for the entire life-span.
To conclude, although having education for better livelihood options is quite essential, in my opinion due to the lack of basic skills for survival as well as the educational organization focusing on high scores is not supreme for all students. Thereby, the motive of teaching centers should be built complete and progressive personality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...hat are required in order to get job at an learly age. Thus, having all virtues, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45833333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11324548012 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3088908127 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0513095439066 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0200977394212 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322983559543 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0340514906633 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404053609234 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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