Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?
There lies a hotly debated topic about what should the wealthier class in this society do to cease the disparity among general public . Some would argue that being more well-off might pose as an opportunity for those people to lend the others a helping hand. From my own point of view, I agree with this sentiment.
Several reasons can be given to justify why the richer class could help those in need. Firstly, when people are more well-heeled, they are likely to have better chances to invest on or support charity programs nationally and internationally. For instance, Bill Gates is an eminent billionaire whose fortune are mostly spent on organizations aiming to assist the disabled, the orphans, the poor and so on. This prestigious man worths anything of our admiration. He is a role model in giving others another an opportunity to change their lives.
Secondly, people who stands at a higher hierarchy tend to sympathize those at the bottom of this social discourse. In fact, many of the renowned millionaire worldwide actually start their business from scratch. Therefore, they seem to possess a sense of sympathy towards the people who are quite similar to them. Take Jack Ma - the billionaire in China - as an example, his application was declined in a plethora of companies before he eventually became owner of Alibaba - a well-known online sale website. Hence, when it comes to helping the less wealthy people, the likelihood of them receiving assistance from the better off class is somewhat greater than ever seen.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the well-to-do may hold better chances to come to the aid of the less lucky group of people, who take up most of the populace in this 21st century. It remains one of their vital mission to shrink the rich-poor gap, which have yet to be addressed rigorously these days. For the aforementioned reason, I am confident of my statements.
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- The bar chart below show a survey of a group of young professionals aged 20 30 who were asked to state which factors motivated them to succeed
- Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people Do you agree or disagree 89
- The bar chart below show a survey of a group of young professionals aged 20 30 who were asked to state which factor motivated them to succeed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75099571837 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6625 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2351401495 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193559756534 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521877927031 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537730872279 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114602808862 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561316600944 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.