Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the most significant thing about being rich is it give person the chance to help other people. From my point of view, i totally agree with this notion since the wealthy people have a plenty of wonderful affection for citiens. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
At first, rich individuals who contribute their ability to the nation is key element for the development of their country, and also they keep significant function in many fields such as education, medical or economic. Furthermore, not only do poor country have homeless people, but also this trend have in very nation all around the world. rich people can help homeless people and unemployment about the financial and occupation. giving them the second life which is better than their life in the past. In addition, many wealthy people can use their experience, information and knowledge which they find in whole of their life to share with every citizens for their contry more developed, they also are the mativation, insprision and tutor of youngs generation. To illustrate, Bills Gate who is the manager of microsoft companies on of the greatest business. Not only dose he use almost his financial to help homeless children and teenagers have a serious illness in all around the world, but also a lot of value documentary book wroten by him to share his neccesary knowledge and interesting information.
However, wealthy people have to help right person who is realy need their provide, support and invest. There are have a lot have people take advantage from rich people provide for their own profit or doing the bad things that can make terrible influence to the individuals and social. Moreover, many citizens are too depend on the support and become lazier, they do not do anything because of these invest from wealthy people.
To conclude, by my agruement from these essay i mostly agree with this statement because of its advantages , but it also have some drawbacks for the individuals. The wealthy people need to have bright choice to help other people better than before.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Some people believe that the most signif...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ill analyse this statement in detail. At first, rich individuals who contribut...
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Line 2, column 343, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Rich
...ve in very nation all around the world. rich people can help homeless people and une...
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Line 2, column 433, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Giving
...ent about the financial and occupation. giving them the second life which is better th...
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Line 2, column 833, Rule ID: ON_OF_THE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...o is the manager of microsoft companies on of the greatest business. Not only dose...
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Line 2, column 879, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...the greatest business. Not only dose he use almost his financial to help homeless c...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nowledge and interesting information. However, wealthy people have to help rig...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... provide, support and invest. There are have a lot have people take advantage from r...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to depend'?
Suggestion: to depend
...and social. Moreover, many citizens are too depend on the support and become lazier, they ...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...social. Moreover, many citizens are too depend on the support and become lazier, they ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... of these invest from wealthy people. To conclude, by my agruement from these ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...this statement because of its advantages , but it also have some drawbacks for the...
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Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...because of its advantages , but it also have some drawbacks for the individuals. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99142857143 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55505844038 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528571428571 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1795831011 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.466666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27748865973 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112818157072 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137111360489 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209214508354 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839704185997 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Some people believe that the most signif...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill analyse this statement in detail. At first, rich individuals who contribut...
^^
Line 2, column 343, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Rich
...ve in very nation all around the world. rich people can help homeless people and une...
^^^^
Line 2, column 433, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Giving
...ent about the financial and occupation. giving them the second life which is better th...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 833, Rule ID: ON_OF_THE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...o is the manager of microsoft companies on of the greatest business. Not only dose...
^^
Line 2, column 879, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...the greatest business. Not only dose he use almost his financial to help homeless c...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nowledge and interesting information. However, wealthy people have to help rig...
^^
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... provide, support and invest. There are have a lot have people take advantage from r...
^^^^
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to depend'?
Suggestion: to depend
...and social. Moreover, many citizens are too depend on the support and become lazier, they ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...social. Moreover, many citizens are too depend on the support and become lazier, they ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of these invest from wealthy people. To conclude, by my agruement from these ...
^^
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...this statement because of its advantages , but it also have some drawbacks for the...
^^
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...because of its advantages , but it also have some drawbacks for the individuals. The...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99142857143 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55505844038 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528571428571 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1795831011 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.466666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27748865973 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112818157072 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137111360489 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209214508354 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839704185997 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.