Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
This day, it is true that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. In this essay, I completely agree that the student don't have homework.
In the one hand, the advantage when the student not be given housework they will learn a lot of new things or new abilities. It is because the children who not only focus with curricula in their school. For example, they not only learn about skill another but also who can a lot of interaction with society in their homework. As result expertise be discovered in out side school and homework inclined decrease child playtime.
On the other hand, the disadvantage when student got homework, it will be hampered for finding skills, it is because they do not have time to look for talent childrent. For example, they children got homework and than they not have time to playing in daily live and according to synthesis sources homework has negative effects to children such us psychology and physical aspect, because homework is a burden for students. As result, homework not solution to children for smart but it can be stale the childrent with syllabus or curricula in their school.
In conclusion, the government, parents and the teacher should discussion about what's need children because education and skill must balance for future child development and the teacher can change homework with creative work
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98353909465 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57207901159 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526748971193 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7693579319 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.1 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354957478241 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161038771162 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155040598965 0.0667982634062 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245403914172 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142464408849 0.056905535591 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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