Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The construction of new houses that are based on the traditional style is the trend of some individuals, whereas other opinions argue that people should be free to choose their own style of houses. But viewpoints are justifiable, but I personally lean towards the latter.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why some people would like to build their houses through the old style of previous ones. One of the major reasons is that people want to preserve cultural heritage in the local communities. At present, the mixture of western culture and new views makes the traditional houses disappear gradually, which promotes people to follow the design of ancestral houses to keep the last heritages. Additionally, this view also depends on their own preference for beauty. For example, many people like houses with old designs which can be constructed by woods with delicate carving rather than modern styles.
On the other hand, there are strong arguments that new houses should adapt the contemporary society and towards more modern styles. To begin with, people should catch up with the new society and be free to build houses with the style they wish. Because people's accommodation will contribute to showing their value and characteristics, a suitable design will bring people a comfortable space to live and work instead of insisting on a traditional style that they do not really love. In other words, with the development of technique and technology on building, the houses that have an innovative approach often save more expenditures than old designs. For instance, traditional construction materials, like natural stone from local quarries, are difficult to obtain, and very expensive even if they are available, while new houses are built using more affordable materials such as cement and brick.
In conclusion, while some people prefer the traditional architecture of localities, I believe that modern housing styles should be the tendency to people acquire and pursue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24764890282 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76878293498 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6690960157 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.769230769 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421134574236 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151418164542 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919893683501 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283323259586 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193966519116 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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