Some people think that in order to solve traffict and transportation problems, people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often believe that to reduce various hassles from daily transporting in urban area, people should be advised to live within cities rather than in rural area or the local community surrounding it. Although I lean to the viewpoint that setting a home in downtown could be an interesting choice than that in countryside, I would have to disagree with this argument.
In the one hand, there are several reasons why the masses prefer to live in city. Since the current commuting time to workplace could be reduced considerably, people could focus on another activities instead. For example, without spending precious time to involve in traffic congestion, a person now may have a chance to pick up his children from home to school and vice versa, thereby, he would have a greater sense of fulfilment in his life.
However, the practice of moving to live in the urban could pose more threats to the public health which in turn, may outweight the benefit that we have mentioned above. As the significant influx of vehicle that people use to commute to their workplace, health problem would be common in cities than anywhere else. For example, the massive level of carbon dioxide, which is released from engine exhausting process, could affect our health in various negative ways. It is believe that the quality of air in the living area of citizen is the main factor that could make the body more vulnerable to disease, such as lung cancer or common flu.
In conclusion, deciding where to live could be a complicated process that would need a further consideration in order to minimize any risks that it could contain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86281588448 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55836228552 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.023710741 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.7 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166256039613 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662354554327 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620710962604 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10575753976 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686316702471 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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