A common debatable topic is whether teachers should teach young people how to be effective members of society or parents should be responsible for this. Some people believe that it is the duty of parents because they rear their child up. However, I think schools should be accountable for this because children spend most part of their day at school.
To start with, children start learning things while they are too young. This is because they have keen observation and they imitate things done in front of them. Therefore, it is a common saying that mothers are the first mentor of a child as they have great influence on their offsprings. Children are receptive to information imparted to them by their elders. Hence, being the first educator of young ones parents can effectively transform them how to be good and kind members of the society. A study showed that children who were given enough time by their parents while they were young were considerably better citizens and their personality was well groomed.
On the other hand, children spend more time at schools than at homes, so teachers should play a crucial role in making them good humans. Mentors are being seen by students as highly respectful and spiritually high, and they have a huge impact on the behaviour and personalities of their students. Therefore, they should figure out ways to improve their students, and to turn them into productive members of community. A report demonstrated that students who were taught in schools that how to be good and beneficial part of society were more kind and helpful towards others. Moreover, in the contemporary era, the trend of both parents working is alarmingly rising. When both of them are working, they do not give the required time to their offsprings. This shows that teachers should take the responsibilty of students otherwise they would get spoiled.
To conclude, although parents have moral duty to upbring their child effectively, they pay handsome amounts to schools so that they can learn from there how to be good inhabitants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, i think, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99418604651 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59215623215 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514534883721 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1308290964 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.058823529 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27103879628 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922658837995 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708666136032 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187786204182 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899042308841 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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