Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that it is duty for all parents who teach their children how to be good person in the society. While others think children will learn it from the school. I believe parents have fully contribute in case of being good members in the society.
Good members in the society are more important. because a society can be developed by good person containing extra versatile. There are many people who need advised and they can get it from Their parents.a society is related to house and children learn which one is right or wrong which is learnt by parents. While a child birth, he/she didn’t know anything even not Himself/herself. As parents have past experience that is need for a Community, they provide authentic to their child. Being a good person is a matter of morality which is know from family. As a consequences of it they only can easily good person in that community.
One the other hand school has a lot of contribution on the children. Although they learn it from their home, it is not enough for them to be a good person. School provides needed theories which they can utilise in their real life.they also can read about distinguished person's biography working for society. By researching the eminent's books they may be motivated from it. Actually there are many parents who did not have enough time to teach their children.in that case teacher are more and more magnificent. Society needs Extra talented people and also needs full of wise people so that they can growth Their society.
In conclusion, a person who would like to be a good Person may learn between parents and teachers. This is to say parents teach initially and then techer blown them in society.
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...en not Himself/herself. As parents have past experience that is need for a Community, they pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77288135593 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5230087418 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484745762712 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6747331737 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2222222222 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243416388982 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976508769216 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662891862683 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192471547335 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937241913344 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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