Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Parents and educators are divided on the optimal moment to start their children learning a foreign language. For me, elementary school is the best time for kids since the benefits much outweigh the downsides, and I'll explain why.
Because children's cognitive faculties are less developed than teens', youngsters between the ages of 6 and 9 have a harder time learning and completing their homework. Overloading their brains with information can lead to confusion and tension. When students don't have time to unwind and have fun, their academic performance suffers, which in turn delays their ability to speak their native language. To begin with, self-study skills in youngsters are not as developed as in adolescents, so they require more guidance from teachers and parents. As a result, students may become distracted and underperform academically.
Psychologists and educational professionals agree that children absorb new skills and knowledge best when they are young, including a new language. Because of their improved memory and ability to mimic a new accent, kids will be able to improve their speaking skills more faster during this time period. They will also be less self-conscious and dread making mistakes. Furthermore, in foreign language classes, students can learn and have fun while also learning about a different culture through games and music. Another major advantage of learning a second language early in life is that it may help you land a fantastic career later on because many firms (such as IBM and AIA) now give preference to applicants who are fluent in a foreign language.
The sooner youngsters are introduced to a new language, the better, in my opinion. The advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
- Young people who commit serious crimes such as robbery or violent attacks should be punished in the same way as adults To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Young people who commit serious crimes such as robbery or violent attacks should be punished in the same way as adults To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Young people who commit serious crimes such as robbery or violent attacks should be punished in the same way as adults To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries However educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
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Suggestion: I'll
...nefits much outweigh the downsides, and Ill explain why. Because childrens cogni...
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...to confusion and tension. When students dont have time to unwind and have fun, their...
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Suggestion: faster
...e able to improve their speaking skills more faster during this time period. They will also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, second, so, while, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32363636364 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87721168972 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607272727273 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5813596475 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0826758722282 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285358122836 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275838075103 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525820109414 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027110012292 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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