Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
people have different views of whether school or parents should be an influential and ideal factor suitable to educate youngsters to be good citizenship of community. in this essay, I am going to shed some light on both points of view and extend partly my support to the school's role in teaching juveniles.
Parents are the ones responsible for providing the needs of their children like love, attention, support, material things, and most of all knowledge. Parents are indeed the best teachers of their children; they give knowledge in several ways. Firstly, parents are the ones who teach their children how to talk in their early age. For example, Mama, Papa are the first words to utter and this is a desirable attempt of parents, which aims to foster their children to babble every early words in their lives. It is also the moment where children learn to communicate and express what he or she feels about things around him or her. Last but not least, parents are responsible for the cognitive and physical development of their children. With acts that seem simple like what toys or type of physical activities parents choose to keep their kids occupied, this would be able to affect significantly the growth of their children.
Despite the above views, I have held the belief that school would be the good surroundings at educate children in terms of good humans of society. The main reason for believing this is that school is the place ideal to teach children to become well-behaved members of the community because it has had various systematically well-educated teachers who are methodically trained in order to teach children. Moreover, academic places would be more beneficial if children who have difficulty causing the struggle of their obstacle can be taught how to easily address such barriers. to give a significantly good example, some school-aged students would have committed juvenile delinquency unless there has been any assistance from teachers and schools.
In conclusion, both schools and parents have had an important role to play in educating children to be good citizenship of the community. I personally believe that school is a good and ideal environment appropriate to teach children to become good people.
- Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09214092141 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75006200811 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542005420054 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6987076805 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.266666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393218530852 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135271937703 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455139820941 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243058082189 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160477015809 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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