Some people think that people who chose a job early and keep doing are more likely to get satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are a few individuals who rapidly consider a major long time occupation. Something else, others affirm that's no issue to alter work up to we discover out one fitting work. By and by, I completely am in favor of afterward idea .
To begin with of all, it is challenging to induce a appropriate work nowadays. Nearly all of schools or colleges had not alot of valuable prepare lessons to encourage understudies have a right way in arrange to decide on their career. Another, worker cannot perceive all data on work what they have to be fulfill in work environment, for occasion, analyzing design have to be do open air rather than within the research facility in spite of the fact that work elucidation is comparable. Additionally, each laborer needs diverse characteristics of employments in several period, same as when they had been hitched or when they concentrate on watch out their family. Thus, spotting a reasonable work which investing a parcel of time and moving the occupation in a few times.
On the other hand, modifying the work isn't requesting to rise a number of issues for either boss or representative. In contrast, employee moreover take a unused work in overseas that they are free to enter any company in arrange to fit their career.
In conclusion, nessesary produce conditions for understudies to reach the proper work in speediest way and extend career showcase for everyone. In general, I totally concur that able to alter a few occupations to approach our culminate career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
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Message: Did you mean 'inducing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: inducing
...To begin with of all, it is challenging to induce a appropriate work nowadays. Nearly all...
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Suggestion: an
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the speediest'.
Suggestion: in the speediest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, in contrast, in general, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93700787402 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93705331909 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653543307087 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8305327097 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0492158608281 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0168822531295 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205920550684 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0288176708606 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00826362239287 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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