Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A human being to function efficiently, a proper balance of physical and mental strength needs to be achieved. This statement can be applied to any field and sports is no exception. In order to be successful in sports, one needs to be physically and mentally strong.
The fundamental requirement of any sports person is that he/she needs to physically fit. Depending on the participation in the sports activities, the extent of their physical strength might vary. For instance, a boxer's physical strength can not be compared to that of a professional golf player. Boxer would have to take down his/her opponent and to achieve this, he/she must be stronger than the opponent. On the other hand, in golf one doesn't have an opponent to tackle, just a golf ball to be sent to a small pit. So, the point is that no matter how small a sport might seem it definitely needs a person to be physically strong.
A sports person has to be mentally strong as well. Let's take the above example, in case of the boxer, if one doesn't have plan of attack/defend and rather just went in believing in one's physical strength, then one would definitely end up in a hospital. The same applies to golf as well, sure a golf player is physically capable of hitting the ball to an extremely large distance, but this doesn't entirely ensure that it will fall in the hole. One needs to plan, analyze the golf course and then proceed with the play. Thus, mental strength does play an important role in the career of sports person.
To conclude, as presented in the above two paragraphs, it is safe to say that physical and mental strength is vital for success in sports.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a boxer' or simply 'boxers'?
Suggestion: a boxer; boxers
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus, well, as to, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64383561644 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62229495863 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503424657534 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7667644592 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172334999537 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743140409826 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057818801376 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125521584528 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252738432239 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.