Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While some people suppose that success in sport depends on physical power, other people believe that mental toughness plays a more crucial role in this field. In this essay, two standpoints are going to be analyzed and personally I advocate the latter.
On the one hand, it is easily understandable that physical vigor is of significant importance in order to accomplish the goals in sport. Obviously, general sport consists of a variety of physical activities which need a muscular body and key skills such as speed, flexibility, stamina and endurance. Therefore, sport players pay much attention to work out on a daily basis with an attempt to gain the best conditions in their health. Moreover, they also try to avoid unexpected injuries which might cause them to suspend their exercising for a short time or even put an end to their sport career.
On the other hand, I hold a strong belief that spiritual strength is truly a major decisive factor for every victory in sport. It means that high spirit may help athletes overcome the tiredness, obstacles, pain and even failure in both training and competition. In other words, it gives them a lot of motivation to pursuit the challenging task. In addition, it is clear that intellectual strength can create extraordinary triumphs in sport. For example, a weak football team can defeat the stronger competitor with highest determination and win-at-all-costs spirit.
In conclusion, although physical power has a vital meaning for the success in sport, I am of the opinion that spiritual factor is more important for sport achievements.
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- Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport while other people think that mental strength is more important Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport while other people think that mental strength is more important Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...team can defeat the stronger competitor with highest determination and win-at-all-costs spir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10344827586 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91883621 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7982563402 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301051055901 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917693405645 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899446166712 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175927200154 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624396038473 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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