Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is certainly true that sports make people healthy. Many people say that physical fitness is essential to perform best in sports while others assume that to active from mind is more significant.
To begin with, having an appropriate physical strength is better for specific sport. Mainly in sport as we watch any sports on television we see that physical fitness is important. It can helps sports person to achieve higher success in their career. For example, many sports requires physical strength such as cricket, football, basketball and many more.
Despite, many people think that mental strength is more essential than physical. There has been a plethora of sports era such as chess, solving puzzles, etc. In this type of games, sports person needs a strategic skills to perform well in game. Also, mental stability will help player to stay focused.
Ideally, we can say that both strength is important in different games. Many games are required more physical strength than mental strength and vice versa.
In the conclusion, from all the aforementioned points, I hold my view that players need both mental and physical powers to win a game.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...t physical fitness is important. It can helps sports person to achieve higher success...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'skill'?
Suggestion: skill
... games, sports person needs a strategic skills to perform well in game. Also, mental s...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07368421053 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49189267142 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5398516767 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.1538461538 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376308325813 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126049236734 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777694671317 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194379693292 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558974556363 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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