Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many believe to win in a sport, one must posses good physical strength. Others believe mental willpower is neccessary for gurrentied winnings. But from my point of view, bodily and emotional strength are both important features of a good athlete.
Games like Football, Rugby, Basketball requires good physical condition whereas Boxing, Wrestling can only be won by raw physical power. The players would have to maintain their body weight constantly. Muscle maintaince and strict diet becomes a part their daily routine.
However, all games must result in winning or defeat. And the sprotsmen must posses high emotional quiotent to both accept defeat and calmly process their victory. The mentality sympathazing the loosers is a humane characteristics of the victor. Emotional build helps in team building. In case of loosing, the fault should lie with the whole team, and not just one person- this type of mindset prevent any sort of bullying among the peers and is a sign of good sprotmenship.
For example, a chess player from my school had broken down crying when he had lost his winning streak. Chess is a battle of minds but the player seemed to have lost his cool and ended up loosing the game and the respect of the audience and his fellow players as well. Usain bolt, the fastest man on earth is often presented as humble man after winning his race. Renowned footballers Leonardo Messi and Christiano Ronaldo never forget to thank their teammates after acheiving their trophies.
Good sprotmenship lies with not only a fit body but also with a fit mind. Athletes should practice to balance mental and physical labour i field. Sports clubs need to employ good psycho-therapist along with a best coach to get the most from their players.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'characteristic'?
Suggestion: characteristic
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Message: Did you mean 'losing the'?
Suggestion: losing the
...emed to have lost his cool and ended up loosing the game and the respect of the audience an...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e to balance mental and physical labour i field. Sports clubs need to employ good...
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Line 9, column 208, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...employ good psycho-therapist along with a best coach to get the most from their p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, whereas, for example, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01369863014 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57324674274 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640410958904 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8300292243 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107961300038 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354507613045 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522015425926 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690736310751 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870856860978 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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