Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there are more and more arguments around the affect of human's two main strength category on sports. Some people think that physical power is the most important, while the others believe that the mental strength is much more crucial. In my opinion, I think which can make the achievement in sport must be the combination of both parts in our body.
On the one hand, I am convinced that the vigor plays a vital role in building a successful sportsman. Firstly, all of the sports in the world now requires the sporters to have a resilient health and a good stamina. This is not only because of the nature of sport but also for ensuring the safety of those participating in these activities. Secondly, some physical superiorities can helps person who possesses one of them can become more prominent and more dominant in the competition. Furthermore, the advantages in body also create greater chances to practice and improve the sporter's skills. Finally, when it comes to the opportunity to discover the athletic talent, if a person had a special physical power, he would be more likely to be detected than someone with just normal physical strength.
On the other hand, I believe that spirit is also a critical factor in making achievement in sport. First of all, a person who want to be successful in the sport he chooses, he have to be stick to it first. Therefore, that person should have a strong willpower and persistence in order to be able to cope with difficulties and failures. For example, there are many sport stars have not received any supports from their families at the very beginning, however, thanks to their love determination in sport, they have succeeded now. Moreover, the mental strength, namely the concentration, sometimes is the factor which can determine the win in the very last moment of a match or a race. A little carelessness and lack of focus possibly lose the advantages and lead to failure. Last but not least, although an athlete can have great skill than his opponent, if he doesn't have as strong spiritual power as his opponent, he may lose.
In conclusion, we can not deny the function of either physical or mental strength, because they construct us and have their own roles. I think it should be combined altogether to create an easier success.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'category' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'categories'.
Suggestion: categories
... the affect of humans two main strength category on sports. Some people think that physi...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ilding a successful sportsman. Firstly, all of the sports in the world now requires the sp...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... successful in the sport he chooses, he have to be stick to it first. Therefore, tha...
^^^^
Line 5, column 587, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
...tal strength, namely the concentration, sometimes is the factor which can determine the win ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 861, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ve great skill than his opponent, if he doesnt have as strong spiritual power as his o...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8253164557 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72373062917 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549367088608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1616411603 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9444444444 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249017798911 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753612122623 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867875214173 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181310570921 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111358329363 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'category' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'categories'.
Suggestion: categories
... the affect of humans two main strength category on sports. Some people think that physi...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ilding a successful sportsman. Firstly, all of the sports in the world now requires the sp...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... successful in the sport he chooses, he have to be stick to it first. Therefore, tha...
^^^^
Line 5, column 587, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
...tal strength, namely the concentration, sometimes is the factor which can determine the win ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 861, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ve great skill than his opponent, if he doesnt have as strong spiritual power as his o...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8253164557 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72373062917 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549367088608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1616411603 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9444444444 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249017798911 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753612122623 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867875214173 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181310570921 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111358329363 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.