Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Playing sport requires many factors, including physical and mental strength. There are many arguments about the importance of these two factors, many people say that mental strength is more crucial in sport, while others say the opposite. Both factors are important, but physical strength is personally considered more crucial.
Some people think that mental strength is more significant, because it can enhance energy. When a player has good mental health, he will have a competent spirit which helps him play better and get a never-give-up will no matter how hard the situation is. The second reasons that people think is focusing on the game with a great extent. A player will have a clear mind which helps them not think of unnecessary things that may interrupt their concentration.
However, from my point of view, physical strength is more crucial. Firstly, players are able to build up and maintain the strength of mental health if they have a good physical strength. A good example of this is football players, they usually take many exercises in order to keep them fit and enhance their stamina which will maintain their energy at the highest level and then, create a better competent spirit. Secondly, physical strength also keep the body in good habitus. Most sport games are long-lasting and require players to have as much stamina as possible. It is naturally believed that good physical strength can make a player compete efficiently until the game ends.
Take everything into consideration, both mental and physical strength are crucial in sport because of a wide range of reasons. However, a good physical strength can create a good mental strength and helps player keep their spirit and stamina strong during the sport games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13286713287 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5529264806 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517482517483 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8796766157 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343061318059 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135368527952 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858706820651 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221155162113 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619754700487 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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