Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities study together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are conflicting views about the ways schools can take to classify classes. While selecting students based on their academic performance can bring students several benefits, I still in favor of the traditional approach of having a class of students from various academic levels.
It is true that having a class of pupil at the same level is likely to enhance their overall academic grades. For elite students, as their study pace are normally faster than the average students, if they can study together, they would not have to spend time learning the knowledge they already knew and therefore can have higher productivity towards study. For students who learn knowledge more slowly, they could also benefit from this. They would have less pressure from their peers, increasing their confidence and academic grades.
However, having a mixed class is fairer and more beneficial for students overall development. Schools are established to educate students to become a better person and therefore should not only focus on academic performance. As there are a large number of students who are short of academic study but good at other subjects, using academy-oriented approach to select students would impair their confidence and self-esteem, resulting in lose study opportunities. What is more, having a mixed class is more beneficial for their future development. This is because when they enter into society, they need to cooperate with people from various backgrounds with different abilities. Studying together with all abilities will prepare students better to adapt to society and increase their chances to succeed.
As discussed above, I believe that student from different levels should be taught together for it is a better way to educate children.
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- Some people think that technology makes life overly complex, so we should make life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities study together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s on academic performance. As there are a large number of students who are short of academic stud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, it is true, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40794223827 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02586520443 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559566787004 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2583853053 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350448662499 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123909649534 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646241587892 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216564323012 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667610796839 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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