Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no denying that health is one of the biggest concerns in society. In light of this, whether scientific research should concentrate on addressing world health issues has become a topic of general interest among citizens. Although this might be persuadable to an extent, I would argue that studying other problems, such as economic and environmental issues can also contribute to this.
Some people give a reason why the scientific study should focus on solving global health problems. An advocate for this opinion might argue that health is the most vital factor for each person since it directly maintains life and helps people to be able to work. The sick or injured person would partly lose their ability to work and earn income, so they need to depend on others which sometimes might be a burden. Moreover, health issues affect social movements. Once health is not guaranteed, society will lose a number of human resources, so projects and plans cannot be implemented. The covid-19 pandemic, for instance, leads many fields in the community to degrade considerably because of the lockdown to implement disease prevention plans. However, if governments decided to lock the borders quickly, easily people can circle the disease area and only focus on solving that.
In my opinion, there are more crucial issues that scientific research should spend the majority of its attention on. As the economy is the core factor of every nation and community, its deterioration, such as poverty and inflation will hit a stroke in most aspects. Unemployment, the degradation of living conditions and the possibility of diseases will boom. In addition, there are also environmental problems which have a direct influence on human health, namely the release of carbon dioxide from transport vehicles and industrial activities, industrial waste and noise pollution all contribute to warning signs in people's health. Therefore, if these two issues are addressed, world health problems will be improved significantly.
In conclusion, although there is no doubt that world health problems need to be paid attention to, there are other issues that should be considered to be biased to enhance the health dilemmas faster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27118644068 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76482536744 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3395558999 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.625 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271844941772 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895132534811 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827700780726 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162762874806 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151393399935 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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