Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that competition should be emboldened in youngster while others trust teamwork is more significant for children’s growth. This essay will discuss how competition and cooperation are both important.
On the one hand, many people trust that competition is the best way to provide motivation for children and make them better adults for many reasons. Firstly, competition motivates youngsters to be better than their peers. For example, at most schools, ratings of students depends on their scores, children strive to be top and in later years of their lives, those who are used to competing would deal with stress easily. Hence, youngsters’ self-esteem and hardworking is raised by competing from the young age which is important for their future steal jobs.
On the other hand, others believe that promoting teamwork spirit will bring bigger potential to be useful adults for youngsters than competition. As a result of education, pupils spend most of their time studying alone, also most of the tests are competitive, therefore, children are becoming isolated. Thus, co-operation is significant for children to learn, such as study in group, group’s presentation or even teamwork competition. Furthermore, every company these days need the co-operation in every aspect of business, because working with other companies, peers is the best way to acquire knowledge and help others with their weakness. Therefore, stress and pressure of working and studying are reduced effectively when working at a team rather than working individually.
To conclude, I strongly agree with that children should be taught to co-operate rather than working alone. On the other hand, we can not refuse the advantage of competition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...team rather than working individually. To conclude, I strongly agree with that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50740740741 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95747652448 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1699856807 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300631511137 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107562989907 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075400081892 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207443738111 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057910640833 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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