Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. That is understandable since it's necessary to know how to cook. If you know how to cook, you can serve yourself and won't be depent on other people. Like nowaday, it's not easy to go out to eat due to the effect of Covid 19, so by the knowledge about food and how to prepare them, you can help yourself a lot. Knowing how to cook is also a way to save money. While it can cost a hundred dollars for a meal, it not as much when you do it yourself. In the other hand, some people think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. That's not wrong. Important subjects is very important and helpful . It's increase your job opportunities and improve your knowledge . By learning subject like history , we know what happened in the past , and by knowing math and physic, our job can be done easier. In my opinion, student should learn both important subjects and the science of food and how to prepare it at school . It both bring many benefits and give student many chances. Important subjects help you alot at work and your income , while the science of food and the ability to prepare it help you with your daily life.Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. In my point of view, school should teach students both of them since it both really necessary and helpful
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, while, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46296296296 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29369003304 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47037037037 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5617760564 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3125 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480520134747 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167062317368 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153284099703 0.0667982634062 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.480520134747 0.151304729494 318% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.3 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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