Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Some people think that should bailiwick the science of food and how to compose it. Others think that school time should be used in find out consequential issue. I discuss both view
people in industrialized nations are indeed more likely to expect to live longer than ever before. as far as I am concerned, this phenomenon can result in some negative consequences of this trend, social can be tackled using appropriate measures
it is possible said that this issue may be caused by many main factors. one of the major issues related to this is that making sure the health care needs for the elderly will put pressure on the government. this is because older people are more vulnerable to chronic diseases, such as heart attacks or diabetes, which lead to requiring special medical treatment to be effectively treated. the government might have to devote a larger budget to health care to serve the growing demands of an aging population. another worrying problem is that a country with increasing life expectancy will be an increase in the proportion of retirement-aging people claiming pension benefits and a decline in the percentage of people working age to pay income taxes. henceforth, the combination of higher pension and lower tax revenues are considered as the serious problem towards a decline in the economy and government spending.
in truth, some measures ought to be taken to resolve these impact issues. one solution to this problem is for the government to increase the importance of the private sector in providing healthcare and pensions. this would help reduce the burden on government spending. another measure would be to encourage the immigration of young working adults, which could help increase tax revenues for the government. Finally, it is important to educate people about the importance of money management and saving for retirement. By doing this, when people reach their retirement age, they will have a certain amount of money to take care of themselves without the need to depend on their children or the government.
in conclusion, various steps could be taken to tackle the problems that a country with an aging population might encounter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, may, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14110429448 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8178081743 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561349693252 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5464526703 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.714285714 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083906280888 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300503987494 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263545858438 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518545313292 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217238005179 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.