Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
People can work day and night to achieve something they look forward to. High Intelligence people can reach the same amount of success with less effort. Some people think that being intelligent is the only way to achieve success. While others think other factors can also lead to the same amount of success. I totally believe that determination and taking risks have the same amount of influence as intelligence to achieve success in life.
No doubt that being intelligent can help to achieve success in more convenient and fast approach. Smart people can avoid obstacles and problems in which they may face in life; because they can forecast most of these issues, and create solutions for it. For instance, scientists like Albert Einstein and Ahmed Zawel helped the nations by creating scientific theories and equations that helped the humanity in many different aspects. No one that has less IQ or intelligence level could reach this amount of success.
On the other hand, there are also type of people who have a limited IQ that can also reach success through struggling in life and determination. People can fail once or twice or a numerous amount, But in the end they will reach what they want and achieve success. We can meet these kinds of people in our daily life for example in work, educational institutions. Taking risks is also an important factor that made people successful. You must be able to study and take risks that may fail and may lead you to success.
In conclusion, intelligence can be classified as the most important factor, but people must also have determination and take risks to achieve success. People only talk about what success Albert Einstein has achieved through his life but no one talked about the number of attempts he failed to achieve this success.In fact, he succeeded because he was determined and didn’t have fear to take risks to achieve what he wanted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ent is the only way to achieve success. While others think other factors can also lea...
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Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lutions for it. For instance, scientists like Albert Einstein and Ahmed Zawel hel...
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Line 2, column 410, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...d equations that helped the humanity in many different aspects. No one that has less IQ or int...
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Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cess. On the other hand, there are also type of people who have a limited IQ tha...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risks achieving'.
Suggestion: risks achieving
...e must also have determination and take risks to achieve success. People only talk about what su...
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Line 4, column 314, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...empts he failed to achieve this success.In fact, he succeeded because he was deter...
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Line 4, column 391, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risks achieving'.
Suggestion: risks achieving
...determined and didn’t have fear to take risks to achieve what he wanted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89164086687 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55332943916 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498452012384 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6278205895 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302160275993 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126660163272 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102113009327 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200652341023 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977517240998 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.