Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
Can success be used to measure intelligence? whether intelligence should be measured with success or in other ways is a widely debated topic. It is mostly thought that intelligence can be estimated by how successful the person is. In my opinion, I go with the idea that intelligence is not the key factor of success.
Intelligence is one of many reasons for someone to be successful, but it’s not main factor for success. Although it is obvious for some of us that intelligent people are mostly successful, we can find a person may lack of confidence, has poor social skills, or even may not know how to behave in an interview, but his scores in any IQ test are very high. For example, my company asked all the employees to take an IQ test , the management of my company found that the best achievers in the company had the lowest scores in the test, on the other hand the worst achievers had the best scores in the test.
Intelligence is measured on the basis of school grades. And school grades don’t guarantee that a person would be successful in life if his school grades are excellent. It is generally seen that people who are less educated but have confidence can flourish in competitive atmosphere. For instance, Egypt is a non-English country, and Egyptians are doing high professional jobs in USA regardless their low English-speaking skills.
In conclusion, success in life comes with hard work and keen to achieve bigger goals. Being intelligence is not the key for your success , you need other skills in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ked all the employees to take an IQ test , the management of my company found that...
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...evers had the best scores in the test. Intelligence is measured on the basis of...
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...ess their low English-speaking skills. In conclusion, success in life comes wit...
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...lligence is not the key for your success , you need other skills in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78867924528 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86344223532 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554716981132 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6780148415 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6153846154 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393020522794 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161364131582 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117573662696 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233656607873 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108405136364 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.