Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence,while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways
What is your opinion?
Some people believe that intelligence is measured by success, conversely, others believe that it can be measured in a variety of ways. This essay agrees on that, that success is not the only way to express intelligence. Both beliefs will be discussed in this essay.
The most ideal way to express intelligence is by being successful, this is what most people think, which makes sense. Successful people could not have achieved what they had achieved with nothing but cleverness.For instance, in order for someone to be in a higher class in life, he has to be smart enough to do so. Also, the ones who work in companies that pays well, are well educated. Another example, for someone to get promoted In a company he must prove his cleverness.
On the other hand, others think otherwise. Intelligence can be shown in other ways. Because clever people do not always achieve success. For example, many teachers in schools are quite smart but they were not able to achieve anything. Furthermore, success is not always about having a wealthy life or being famous. There are many stories of people who sacrificed their knowledge for the sake of humanity. Such as the Egyptian doctor who treated patients for free, which reflects his intelligence as a doctor.
To sum up, success might be one way to measure success. However, it is not the only one. In my point of view, people can sometimes succeed in certain things without being smart, so success might be an inaccurate measurement for success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8862745098 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.649268504 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3891185358 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2941176471 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441485452495 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134371373126 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121065834391 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265312474637 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462599887654 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.