Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. discuss both view and give opinion
Nowadays, when education is more and more vital, the role of teacher is undeniable not only in constructing subjects but also in nurturing children's character. Although there are ideas ignoring this statement and they said teachers are just a occupation to teaching academic, I still vote for the first argument.
On the one hand, there are various reasons for people to think that the main aim of teachers is teaching just only academic. The first reason is the strict opinion of some families. parents draw their own accurate plan for their children and they believe that educating them totally belongs to parents’ responsibility. Moreover, not every teacher has excellent personality, they just the people who have academic foundation and teaching method so parents’ doubts about teachers’ character is reasonable. Last but not least, the main aim of going to school is widening knowledge. Therefore, focusing only on lecturing subjects will improve the teaching quality more effectively than diving attention into lots of different parts.
On the opposite side, when the significant contributions of teacher in basing a child’s character are taken into consideration, it is obviously much more important than the other side. Fist in kindergarten, academic knowledge is not required in this level so the teachers’ functions are assisting children’s socialization and behavior development instead of tutoring them calculate math or do science experiment. The second reason is that children spend more time at school with teachers than with their parents at home and for that reason, we can completely recognize that teachers’ affects in children is playing an essential role in their growth even more than family do. Extensively, morality is more and more valued in today life. For instant, we have civic subject and in every lesson, there are practical exercise required to judge student’ awareness in daily. that leads to an issue that if teachers want to be admired by their students, they need to be honest and kind because they are models for individual child to look up to learn from.
In conclude, besides those statement that teachers better cover well their subject-teaching jobs because they doubt about teachers’ ethic and afraid whether it will reduce teaching productivity, I always strongly believe that the teachers’ responsibility in separating the right and wrong for children is much more necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: Parents
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Suggestion: That
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Message: Did you mean 'this statement' or 'those statements'?
Suggestion: this statement; those statements
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2102.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48825065274 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10412350971 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566579634465 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3201806387 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.133333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5333333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267872053056 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904239146052 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657974832686 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177538026616 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038828800204 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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