Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The global climate change is a issue that is currently discussed. The fact is that the temperature varies, some people believe it is decreasing while most people argue it is increasing. Furthermore that is the discussion if this increase of temperature is a natural thing or if it is man made.
People who suport that the temperature is decreasing, they analise the data obtained by the measure of the temperature in deep waters of all oceans.And the argue that the increase of temperature ocours only inside the great cities, and thus it is an isolate phenon.
On the other hand, people that suports the theory of global warming, they also use other data, collected in deep oceans that suport their claim. Also the argue that were there is man made pollution, there is the biggest increase of temperature.
Therefore people who believe that the climate isn't changing, the don't care about it. However those who believe that the climate is changing, they could believe that every person have a role on this and must produce less CO2 by using public transportation oftenlly, for example. On the other side, there are people who think that this kind of action is irrelevant.
In conclusion, I believe that climate varies normaly and the temperature isn't constantly increasing. In my opinion on the further years the temperature will remain the same.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.18 0.155533422707 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.068 0.0946595960268 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04 0.0501214627716 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.044 0.0437548338989 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.044 0.0403226058552 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67753724344 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0326793684256 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.136 0.0861772015684 158% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.012 0.021408717616 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.036 0.011925033212 302% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1354.0 1933.35771543 70% => OK
No of words: 227.0 316.048096192 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96475770925 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20517956788 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.343612334802 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246696035242 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145374449339 0.203846283523 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118942731278 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67753724344 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.037074148 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519823788546 0.56093040696 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.6428820592 60.7387585426 78% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6363636364 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9153351207 49.517814964 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.090909091 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 0.814263465372 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.99599198397 300% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.3059671606 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.54545454545 1.69124875643 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270523097041 0.332605444948 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.172454678927 0.102741220458 168% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0817252996756 0.0668466124924 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.733143501832 0.534860350844 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.110226168683 0.148594505496 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162530864403 0.134430193775 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675596439868 0.0742795772207 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.398756874783 0.324371583561 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0886716714222 0.0638462369009 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18914934779 0.228012699653 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718244468032 0.058150111329 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.