Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Other think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both of views and give your opinion.
There are numerous of problem in the country. And having said that, the government should not preserve the art and culture of the country is false in my view. government should also look after the other sectors along with art.
Firstly, government should not be too influenced in the name of development so that art needs to be collapsed. art is the backbone of the society. Without art, the color and harmony of society is impossible. For an example, the Kumal are the people who used to make pottery from mud in nepal but in the lack of government reservation and preservation, they are in the verge of existence. Now, the youngsters are not ready to adopt the occupation what their ancestors did in the past. If government did have offered some handsome offer for them and facilitate then this kinds of scenario should not been seen today.
Secondly, government is not only the only organization who is responsible to keep the art alive in the society. In the circumstance of nepal, guthi is one of the local body who also holds responsible for the preservation of art. offering a small grant, government can help a lot in the caretaking of the art. For an example, almost temple in the Kathmandu valley is the part of guthi and they do have their own organization chart of function. The local people of their own cast and religion are the pillar of this local organization so that it assists to run smoothly within a small budget.
To conclude, authority should and need to save the art and culture for the next generation at any cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Government
...ure of the country is false in my view. government should also look after the other sector...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Art
...ment so that art needs to be collapsed. art is the backbone of the society. Without...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...some offer for them and facilitate then this kinds of scenario should not been seen ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Offering
...esponsible for the preservation of art. offering a small grant, government can help a lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67399267399 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68193911835 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.808053228 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0931132464892 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292143124558 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317592399504 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574710726944 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033725263896 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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