Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
Some people believe that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noice a person makes because of the annoyed it affect to the individuals. From my point of view, this agrument have both benefits and drawbacks with each person or each occupation. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, government can be made the enviroment more peacefull for the social and the individuals life by their strict rules. Not only do it help citizens more concentrate in thier jobs for the best contribution to economy development, but also it will be more attractive with the international relationship friend. Furthermore, the individuals will be built advantage habit, being appropriate with social potential, traditional value and their cutural. To illustrate, with vietnam people traditional that it is not encorage citizens speak too loud or make noise because of its disturbance for the individuals life and numerous aspect of social.
On the other hand, in some fields, occupation and emergency situation high notion is hugely significant such as star entertainer, police and professional tutor. The strict laws from the state can be very hamrfull for their ability, natural talent and future career, and also it will be appropriate oppotunity for terrible people take advantage for their onw revenue from this mistake. Moreover, strict rules will reduce graduately creative the language skill of the individuals. For instance, working in the noice workplace can be the pressure, inspiration and motivation of the youngs generation to develop their career.
To conclude, by my agrument from these essay this statement have its own advantage and drawbacks appropriate with each situation, so the state need to have bright plan to improve the social life and development of the nation.
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...t more peacefull for the social and the individuals life by their strict rules. Not only do...
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...e by their strict rules. Not only do it help citizens more concentrate in thier jobs...
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...oise because of its disturbance for the individuals life and numerous aspect of social. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3044982699 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87618401316 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560553633218 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8011839565 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.75 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241364413065 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927669285472 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13155322593 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144083939517 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952894913841 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.