Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of the society. Others think young people are free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, many people think that young generation should keep on following the traditional culture of the society whereas another consider they are free to do as they please. I strong opine that young people need to live by their own lifestyle and I will explain my view below.
On the one hand, old traditional culture offers people lots of advantage. First of all, the traditional code of conduct is one of important lessons for newly child generation. For example, with the interaction and influence of grandparents, the younger generations will become more mature and careful when it comes to important events. Cause they are accessed with much of good traditional from old generation in their family. Old tradition is enable to shape one’s cultural identify and teaches them about values of the past history, which should be keep bringing into play the good tradition.
On the other hand, young generation are living by their own way also offers them a great deal of experience. Compared to old people, young people tend to be more active, for instance, they are trying to against bad social customs such as racial discrimination, sex discrimination. They speak their voice and fight for the right. On top of that, living by their own way is one of element to develop their potential, which helps them easier in identify their job in future.
In conclusion, following young people lifestyles has a numerous benefits, it is a positive influence on young generation. Although we can not deny the impact of old culture on society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my view, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01556420233 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73015363868 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5337604177 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1538461538 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254574376189 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928710884723 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986478496635 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184265911743 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114104412756 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.