Some people think that young people should follow the traditions of the society. Others think young people are free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is believed that young people should follow the traditions of the community while others think that the young are free to behave as individuals. It is great to follow tradition, but young adults should look for the newest trends as well.
On the one hand, traditions of society have some benefits. First of all, social customs make young people become formal and mature. When they have dinner with their family, for instance, the table manners they express will judge their attitude and their education. Moreover, traditions are derived from living experiences many years ago by the ancestors and passed down for centuries. These things not only make our society different from other countries, but also contribute to making the community more and more developed.
On the other hand, some social customs also have negative aspects. Firstly, those who follow traditional customs like the elderly have ancient ways of thinking. They inhibit their children from gaining remarkable achievements in a better environment. Beside that, many traditions are outdated in modern society. It is not only the young that need to catch up with the development and innovation's today, but also the world. The world cannot live modern, convenient lives if we keep the old customs and do not create new inventions. Furthermore, when young people are free to behave as individuals, they can develop their individualistic by following contemporary artists who motivate them.
To sum up, social customs have both advantages and disadvantages. I totally agree that the drawbacks outweigh the positive aspects of the traditions of the community.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29615384615 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73773488631 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4989753926 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281714226285 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909265063984 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123523142112 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186485781606 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143253904324 0.056905535591 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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