“Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.”
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People has diverged between how zoos are cruel and should be closed down, and how zoos are useful and important to protect wild animals. This essay agrees with those people who think zoos are cruel and should be locked down. This essay will discuss how do zoos badly and deeply damage the environment? And why are zoos cruel?
Zoos are dangerous places for animals and badly, deeply and slowly destroy the environment. All of humans, know and believe in how accurately environment has organised, in spite of that, many people still do many changes, which nearly destroyed the environment. For example, the global warming, one of the damages which caused by humans, which destroyed the weather and melting the ice all over the world which caused many highers in sea level.
Zoos are unethical, unconscious and inhuman places. Remember, how mourns, sorrow, depressed and tension you were feeling once you've forced to stay home, because of Corona Virus. If you forced to stay home for ever, how would you feel. Now, imagine, how badly, deeply and slowly animals will be killed. Animals are souls with emotions, we are killing them emotionally and it's worth than killing them physically.
Finally, we have to understand how accurately environment has organised, and this is the only way to understand how cruelly people are killing these souls even if it just a mental homicide. It can't be easy to any kind soul live in jail just for fun or gain money. Give to gain, resuscitation to feel and feel to understand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, still, for example, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90661478599 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43751260473 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568093385214 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0194519213 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251145047127 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974266359149 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113874093565 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148616712949 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155620752625 0.056905535591 273% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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