Some people think that Zoos are cruel and should be closed however some people think that Zoos are useful for protecting rare animals.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this present era, animals are regarded as the gift, which is given by the god. Some mankinds believe that zoos are brutal and ought to be closed others however reckoned that wildlife parks are very helpful for protecting the endangered species. I will discuss both views before coming to my opinion.
On one hand, zoo is the place, where individuals can see and enjoy the wild animals and get some cognizance of fauna of foreing. Some people say that mebageries are in human because their employees do not supply good facilities : they do not provide food time to time; do not take care properly; do not give better medical facilities; treat very badly, these are the elements, which are affecting the life of species. For an instance, the well known place of Austria - zoological garden, where few workers gave poison to two elephants and killed, after that they sold its teeths to get more money, when government knew that story, it suspended them and gave two years punishment.
On the other hand, the pivotal role has been being played by the zoo for animals because it is working as a caretaker of fauna : provide good facilities to secure the animals, supply good quality of meals to grow and keep healthy, weekly checkup, if there is any health problem at that time veterinarian give proper medical treatment also at the time of injuries. For an example, in 2019, when many animals were affected by forest fires in Australia the veterinarians took injured species to zoos and gavehigh quality of treatment to save fauna.
To conclude, in my opinion, wildlife parks not cruel but its few employees are inhuman. Zoos are considered as a home of animals and its worker as a caretaker of species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81292517007 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47367300709 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.1828614227 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.5 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24904927936 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954329981962 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588949491969 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149019291315 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691884677068 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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