Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of Global Warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to takel the issue?
In this 21st century, the use of vehicles are increasing, accordingly, the pollution has been booming by leaps and bound, which affects the climate. Presently, one of the hazardous problems - global warming which has been being faced by the world. In this essay, I have discussed the causes and preventive measures, which authors and individuals or to take to deal with this issue.
On the one hand, nowadays, the Global heating is one of the serious matters. There are many origins of happening the climate warming. Due to the emission of carbon dioxide which release from the fumes of automobiles, fumes of some factories, another reason is deforestation to construct the roads; factories; buildings and many more. These are the elements, which are affecting the climate. For an example, one scientific research shows that, on account of cutting down the trees and more gas emission of carbon dioxide, accordingly, not only destruction of ozone layer but also raise the possibility of acid rain and affect the chain of climate.
On the other hand, government and citizens both are responsible to take some steps to to tackel the issue of global heat. To deal with this problem people have to reduce the use of fossil fuels,, utilise tree transformation techniques instead of destroyed it. Some steps should be taken by the authors. For an instance, increase the cost of fuels, which makes individuals to less use of vehicles; encourage them to gain plantation and ban the HFC - Hydro Fluoro Carbons. All things assist to drop down the heating.
To conclude, carbon dioxide, deforestation, fumes and many gases effect the weather and climate but if humans and governments can decrease the use of these kind of elements, which help to deal with the matter of global warming.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...als or to take to deal with this issue. On the one hand, nowadays, the Global h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of carbon dioxide which release from the fumes of automobiles, fumes of some fact...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
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...both are responsible to take some steps to to tackel the issue of global heat. To dea...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...th are responsible to take some steps to to tackel the issue of global heat. To d...
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Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...e have to reduce the use of fossil fuels,, utilise tree transformation techniques ...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...and governments can decrease the use of these kind of elements, which help to deal with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0406779661 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70033250207 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.38462448 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167173227932 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583647913066 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833877786662 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960945770964 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328244200957 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...als or to take to deal with this issue. On the one hand, nowadays, the Global h...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of carbon dioxide which release from the fumes of automobiles, fumes of some fact...
^^
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...both are responsible to take some steps to to tackel the issue of global heat. To dea...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th are responsible to take some steps to to tackel the issue of global heat. To d...
^^
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...e have to reduce the use of fossil fuels,, utilise tree transformation techniques ...
^^
Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...and governments can decrease the use of these kind of elements, which help to deal with th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0406779661 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70033250207 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.38462448 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167173227932 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583647913066 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833877786662 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960945770964 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328244200957 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.