Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Dedicating our life for working in the same firm for some people is their best choice. While, there are some people who are tend to work in different places. In this cases, i believe by working in the same firm for a long time could show our loyalty. Further, working in some different places could increase our experiences for working.
Firstly, Laboring in the same office for a long period could make the workers being loyalty to their organisation, it increases their responsible for caring about issues that happened in their organisations. For instance, the workers who have been working for 8 years in a firm are tend to stay with their office at the time some problems occurred to the office, and also the will try to fix it since they loyal to their working place. Moreover, having a job in the same place for a long time could increase their ability in the specific job which they are done.
On the other hand, moving to some work places for several employee could increase their working experience since by working in the different places, it will increase their ability and work experience. as a result they will be more responsive to handle a new job that they want to obtain. For example, some employee who change their work place for several time will be more responsive for accepting and handling their new job since they have some working experiences in different places. Moreover, they could be more flexible to adapt in their new work places.
In conclusion, for several workers, dedicating their work in a same office for a long period could increase their responsible and ability in their specific job. However, changing office for some employee could rise their working experiences. I believe that dedicating our life for work in one organisation have more benefits than the other one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85530546624 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48793575884 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.392282958199 0.561755894193 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6179111511 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423026264352 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215597633686 0.084324248473 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996811248831 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329573211497 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552770419805 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.