Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.
Discuss both these viewas and give your own opinion.
Everyone chooses their professions differently in life in order to better organize their life. Some people are satisfied with one job for the rest of their lives, while others prefer to work in different work.
Nowadays, to choose work is important people's order in their life. Some people like to work in the same organization all their working life. Thus, they become very loyal their work. Besides, some organizations encourage their employees every month and as a result they want to stay in that organization longer and they work better and also in this organization to this type of people will have a good reputation and organizations can also give a house or a car and similar gifts after retirement If a person changes his job because he is bored or dissatisfied with his work, firstly he will lose himself good job and secondly, it will be difficult to find another job.
However, to work the same organization has some problems, such as it leads to failure to some people and as a consequence they compel to alter their work. In addition, this failure leads them to greater success and as a result they work harder on themselves. Some people working in the same profession often change their works because they are bored of working in the same work. Moreover, they want to increase their friends in their life. Such people are common in life these days. For instance, my uncle is very cheerful his choosing work depends on his character that is why, he often change his work.
My view about this issue, if people work different type of organization their life experience will increase significantly during their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84642857143 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58442894257 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478571428571 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.061144921 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422046407351 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211673779285 0.084324248473 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111506754066 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304353841242 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074021736292 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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