Some people work for the same organisation for a lifetime. Others think it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Occupation is lifeline of someone and guarantee necessities everyone. Several society members consider that working in the same place or company more convenient, others oppose this notion and think that get a job in different location giving improvement in their career. I will discuss both viewpoints and convey the opinion.
Disputes over employment steadily become hot issues in social life. Many of people assume growth and work in the right place since the first time have capability to increasing professionality in one's self and it is not difficult to adaptation in another environment, as a result communication among people more better because was know each other since a long time. As illustration, a teachers will work in one school for few years and this situation is important for their career because development of mentality in their self tend better rather changing school and they was used with organization structure.
On the other hand, circumstances of work environment have big impact to work result. In other words, someone will yields great jobs when the conditions of place support to go forward. Instead, when someone feel emphasis with the environment they intricately to improve their skill and career, and any some jobs necessitate the worker to move place or should be mutation if want to promoted and get high salary. For example, software engineer are likely to a good hike when they move to new company and have many occasion to expand their oppurtunity in advanced country.
To conclude, all jobs have value in it self and depend on point of view because each jobs have own qualification and give big impact to each employee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...bility to increasing professionality in ones self and it is not difficult to adaptat...
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Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
... as a result communication among people more better because was know each other since a lon...
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Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...on among people more better because was know each other since a long time. As illust...
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Line 2, column 382, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a teacher' or simply 'teachers'?
Suggestion: a teacher; teachers
...her since a long time. As illustration, a teachers will work in one school for few years a...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'yield'
Suggestion: yield
...rk result. In other words, someone will yields great jobs when the conditions of place...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...rt to go forward. Instead, when someone feel emphasis with the environment they intr...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...e the worker to move place or should be mutation if want to promoted and get high salary...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occasion seems to be countable; consider using: 'many occasions'.
Suggestion: many occasions
... when they move to new company and have many occasion to expand their oppurtunity in advanced...
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Line 4, column 37, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...y. To conclude, all jobs have value in it self and depend on point of view because eac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08791208791 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7793147407 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.6411454143 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.272727273 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230674584858 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767911474193 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594224293238 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126167200786 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489829508026 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.