Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Vernacular is a pride of each countries. Being visitors, someone should know the own language of it country for communication, because it will cause in social life even in practically. I totally agree with this notion and think that every single person must to be master in another language at least international language (english).
First of all, development of economic in some countries have tight connection with original language in that region. In other words, some language will determine transformation of life even this problem being easy for someone to practice their activities. Moreover, someone with native language more handy to found a job than people that rely on their ability. For instance, a survey conducted by British Government found that organization prefer a candidate with soft skill capable, irrespective from skill of someone is important part to encourage improvement of company. Fundamentally, someone with advance skill will feel difficult to talking each other when they not adept with the own language.
Secondly, language is the best method to enter in social life. On the other hand, when someone with high socialization should be advanced in language. Furthermore, everyday we met a lot of people in our life and was became prevalant if soft skill is a part of communication and will make someone feel comfortable. For example, many students every years study abroad in foreign countries, before departure they requested to attach certificate of foreign language, because from this letter we know capacity of their language. Thats why we must appropriating language with where we live.
To conclude, language will control our life and direct our way to best place, because from it is many positive impact can we get.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...tion and think that every single person must to be master in another language at least ...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...met a lot of people in our life and was became prevalant if soft skill is a part of co...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
... of communication and will make someone feel comfortable. For example, many students...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ter we know capacity of their language. Thats why we must appropriating language with...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
...ill control our life and direct our way to best place, because from it is many positive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, for instance, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24199288256 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87974907758 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569395017794 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5059262583 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.214285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180887671763 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668064234027 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426167506207 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106969818376 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384767007665 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.