Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is belief that the working in same organization their whole is good. But the some people prefer working in different companies to experience variability. In my opnion, the permanent jobs are better than the changing work situations when mood arrives.
The people toiling in same work environment has many benefits such as higher salary, good hold on the company on-going etc. Consequently, one’s working in company for many years have good understanding on the company’s history, financial matters and business dealings. These people also gain good impression from their higher authorities and obtain favorable positions in the company. In businesses, establishing belief, intelligence and eminence in one company benefits by acquiring good partnerships and costumers. Jobs such as teaching require building relationships with students and parents which is not possible while changing job frequently. Another key aspect of working long term is a job security. For instance, if there is plunge in economy, the new employees will be first considered for removing rather than the efficient older employees.
Nowadays, youngsters prefer working in various organizations and experiencing change in work. If asked why, they usually reply as new experiences offers newer oppurtunities. This is also true, working in different companies enable people to experience new colleagues, working relationships and varied company managements. For example, changing work situations may increase people’s creativity and way of working, if their speciality is art department. However, the change also introduces other conditions such as uncertainty in jobs, interacting with mean office authorities and low salaries. The people also have to adjust to new colleagues, policies and office timings with each change in work.
Thus, both working situations have their own pros and cons. However, deciding the situation depends each person’s perception and goals. But I think, long term jobs have more job and economical security compared to the temporary work sutiations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...ganization their whole is good. But the some people prefer working in different comp...
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Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...higher salary, good hold on the company on-going etc. Consequently, one's working i...
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Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pared to the temporary work sutiations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08828021731 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.510033976 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.2105263158 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2105263158 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340800753721 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114635996658 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842784878145 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227028678367 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642566408868 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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