Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead going directly to university What are the advantages and disadvantages

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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

Nowadays , after completing senior secondary education , students go for travel or to work for a duration of time rather than going to their further studies directly . There are several benefits and disbenefits to taking a break after school .

Several advantages are there to study after taking a gap, the first and foremost advantage , more creativity, knowledge and seriousness about what they want to do next . For instance , even though they are totally indulged in their education for many years when they have a break , they have no stress on their mind and spend a quantity of their time . Although they grab more knowledge and have to think freely about their carrier , when the pupil just goes for course after completing the school then they do not have much time to think about their subjects and interests . Moreover , they have experience . Nevertheless , they go for work , they get a good experience and have a chance to learn well about it practically .

There is a lot of disadvantage also , some students do not return back to their course . For example , they are doing a job or job they like as its earning is good and work is good , they do not like to come back because they are happy with it . In addition , although they lose the chance to be expert in that field , however they do their studies then they have a degree and can make a career in a big company , now they can only do a task on a small scale .

In conclusion , however , the student can have an experience of a job , they can not be able to expert in a particular career . Every coin has two sides , a positive and a negative , same is followed by having a gap in school and university education

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59932659933 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51011487397 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491582491582 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3636801755 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158442046275 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715907826855 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689177381654 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1160550302 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849265772973 0.056905535591 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Nowadays , after completing senior secondary educa...
^^
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...er completing senior secondary education , students go for travel or to work for a...
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Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... going to their further studies directly . There are several benefits and disbenef...
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Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...sbenefits to taking a break after school . Several advantages are there to st...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ak after school . Several advantages are there to study after taking a gap, t...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... a gap, the first and foremost advantage , more creativity, knowledge and seriousn...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...iousness about what they want to do next . For instance , even though they are to...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...what they want to do next . For instance , even though they are totally indulged ...
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...xt . For instance , even though they are totally indulged in their education for ...
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...dulged in their education for many years when they have a break , they have no st...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...n for many years when they have a break , they have no stress on their mind and s...
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... mind and spend a quantity of their time . Although they grab more knowledge and ...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...time . Although they grab more knowledge and have to think freely about their car...
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...have to think freely about their carrier , when the pupil just goes for course af...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ve to think freely about their carrier , when the pupil just goes for course afte...
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Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...think about their subjects and interests . Moreover , they have experience . Neve...
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... their subjects and interests . Moreover , they have experience . Nevertheless , ...
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...cts and interests . Moreover , they have experience . Nevertheless , they go for ...
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...rests . Moreover , they have experience . Nevertheless , they go for work , they ...
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...r , they have experience . Nevertheless , they go for work , they get a good expe...
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...rience . Nevertheless , they go for work , they get a good experience and have a c...
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...hance to learn well about it practically . There is a lot of disadvantage also ...
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.... There is a lot of disadvantage also , some students do not return back to t...
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... There is a lot of disadvantage also , some students do not return back to th...
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... There is a lot of disadvantage also , some students do not return back to thei...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
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Suggestion: return
...advantage also , some students do not return back to their course . For example , they ar...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...dents do not return back to their course . For example , they are doing a job or j...
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...eturn back to their course . For example , they are doing a job or job they like ...
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... , they are doing a job or job they like as its earning is good and work is good ...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... as its earning is good and work is good , they do not like to come back because t...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...come back because they are happy with it . In addition , although they lose the ch...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...use they are happy with it . In addition , although they lose the chance to be exp...
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...se the chance to be expert in that field , however they do their studies then they...
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Suggestion: ,
...e and can make a career in a big company , now they can only do a task on a small ...
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Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...they can only do a task on a small scale . In conclusion , however , the studen...
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...task on a small scale . In conclusion , however , the student can have an exper...
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...small scale . In conclusion , however , the student can have an experience of a...
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... student can have an experience of a job , they can not be able to expert in a par...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...be able to expert in a particular career . Every coin has two sides , a positive a...
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...icular career . Every coin has two sides , a positive and a negative , same is fol...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...as two sides , a positive and a negative , same is followed by having a gap in sch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59932659933 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51011487397 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491582491582 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3636801755 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158442046275 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715907826855 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689177381654 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1160550302 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849265772973 0.056905535591 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.