Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages.
Nowadays , after completing senior secondary education , students go for travel or to work for a duration of time rather than going to their further studies directly . There are several benefits and disbenefits to taking a break after school .
Several advantages are there to study after taking a gap, the first and foremost advantage , more creativity, knowledge and seriousness about what they want to do next . For instance , even though they are totally indulged in their education for many years when they have a break , they have no stress on their mind and spend a quantity of their time . Although they grab more knowledge and have to think freely about their carrier , when the pupil just goes for course after completing the school then they do not have much time to think about their subjects and interests . Moreover , they have experience . Nevertheless , they go for work , they get a good experience and have a chance to learn well about it practically .
There is a lot of disadvantage also , some students do not return back to their course . For example , they are doing a job or job they like as its earning is good and work is good , they do not like to come back because they are happy with it . In addition , although they lose the chance to be expert in that field , however they do their studies then they have a degree and can make a career in a big company , now they can only do a task on a small scale .
In conclusion , however , the student can have an experience of a job , they can not be able to expert in a particular career . Every coin has two sides , a positive and a negative , same is followed by having a gap in school and university education
- The diagrams show how glass containers such as bottles are produced and recycled 78
- Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults Do you agree or disagree 89
- Topic Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life Is this a positive or negative development 89
- Some people find advertisements amusing or annoying and they are not influenced by this when they shop To what extend do you agree or disagree 89
- Topic Some people say team sports football have lots of benefits Others say Individual sports swimming tennis are better Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Nowadays , after completing senior secondary educa...
^^
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...er completing senior secondary education , students go for travel or to work for a...
^^
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... going to their further studies directly . There are several benefits and disbenef...
^^
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...sbenefits to taking a break after school . Several advantages are there to st...
^^
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ak after school . Several advantages are there to study after taking a gap, t...
^^
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... a gap, the first and foremost advantage , more creativity, knowledge and seriousn...
^^
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...iousness about what they want to do next . For instance , even though they are to...
^^
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...what they want to do next . For instance , even though they are totally indulged ...
^^
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xt . For instance , even though they are totally indulged in their education for ...
^^
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dulged in their education for many years when they have a break , they have no st...
^^
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n for many years when they have a break , they have no stress on their mind and s...
^^
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... mind and spend a quantity of their time . Although they grab more knowledge and ...
^^
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...time . Although they grab more knowledge and have to think freely about their car...
^^
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...have to think freely about their carrier , when the pupil just goes for course af...
^^
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve to think freely about their carrier , when the pupil just goes for course afte...
^^
Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...think about their subjects and interests . Moreover , they have experience . Neve...
^^
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... their subjects and interests . Moreover , they have experience . Nevertheless , ...
^^
Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cts and interests . Moreover , they have experience . Nevertheless , they go for ...
^^
Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rests . Moreover , they have experience . Nevertheless , they go for work , they ...
^^
Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r , they have experience . Nevertheless , they go for work , they get a good expe...
^^
Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rience . Nevertheless , they go for work , they get a good experience and have a c...
^^
Line 3, column 730, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hance to learn well about it practically . There is a lot of disadvantage also ...
^^
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... There is a lot of disadvantage also , some students do not return back to t...
^^
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... There is a lot of disadvantage also , some students do not return back to th...
^^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... There is a lot of disadvantage also , some students do not return back to thei...
^^
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...advantage also , some students do not return back to their course . For example , they ar...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...dents do not return back to their course . For example , they are doing a job or j...
^^
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eturn back to their course . For example , they are doing a job or job they like ...
^^
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... , they are doing a job or job they like as its earning is good and work is good ...
^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... as its earning is good and work is good , they do not like to come back because t...
^^
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...come back because they are happy with it . In addition , although they lose the ch...
^^
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...use they are happy with it . In addition , although they lose the chance to be exp...
^^
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...se the chance to be expert in that field , however they do their studies then they...
^^
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e and can make a career in a big company , now they can only do a task on a small ...
^^
Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...they can only do a task on a small scale . In conclusion , however , the studen...
^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...task on a small scale . In conclusion , however , the student can have an exper...
^^
Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...small scale . In conclusion , however , the student can have an experience of a...
^^
Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... student can have an experience of a job , they can not be able to expert in a par...
^^
Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...be able to expert in a particular career . Every coin has two sides , a positive a...
^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...icular career . Every coin has two sides , a positive and a negative , same is fol...
^^
Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...as two sides , a positive and a negative , same is followed by having a gap in sch...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59932659933 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51011487397 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491582491582 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3636801755 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158442046275 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715907826855 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689177381654 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1160550302 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849265772973 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Nowadays , after completing senior secondary educa...
^^
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...er completing senior secondary education , students go for travel or to work for a...
^^
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... going to their further studies directly . There are several benefits and disbenef...
^^
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...sbenefits to taking a break after school . Several advantages are there to st...
^^
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ak after school . Several advantages are there to study after taking a gap, t...
^^
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... a gap, the first and foremost advantage , more creativity, knowledge and seriousn...
^^
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...iousness about what they want to do next . For instance , even though they are to...
^^
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...what they want to do next . For instance , even though they are totally indulged ...
^^
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xt . For instance , even though they are totally indulged in their education for ...
^^
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dulged in their education for many years when they have a break , they have no st...
^^
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n for many years when they have a break , they have no stress on their mind and s...
^^
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... mind and spend a quantity of their time . Although they grab more knowledge and ...
^^
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...time . Although they grab more knowledge and have to think freely about their car...
^^
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...have to think freely about their carrier , when the pupil just goes for course af...
^^
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve to think freely about their carrier , when the pupil just goes for course afte...
^^
Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...think about their subjects and interests . Moreover , they have experience . Neve...
^^
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... their subjects and interests . Moreover , they have experience . Nevertheless , ...
^^
Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cts and interests . Moreover , they have experience . Nevertheless , they go for ...
^^
Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rests . Moreover , they have experience . Nevertheless , they go for work , they ...
^^
Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r , they have experience . Nevertheless , they go for work , they get a good expe...
^^
Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rience . Nevertheless , they go for work , they get a good experience and have a c...
^^
Line 3, column 730, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hance to learn well about it practically . There is a lot of disadvantage also ...
^^
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... There is a lot of disadvantage also , some students do not return back to t...
^^
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... There is a lot of disadvantage also , some students do not return back to th...
^^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... There is a lot of disadvantage also , some students do not return back to thei...
^^
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...advantage also , some students do not return back to their course . For example , they ar...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...dents do not return back to their course . For example , they are doing a job or j...
^^
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eturn back to their course . For example , they are doing a job or job they like ...
^^
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... , they are doing a job or job they like as its earning is good and work is good ...
^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... as its earning is good and work is good , they do not like to come back because t...
^^
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...come back because they are happy with it . In addition , although they lose the ch...
^^
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...use they are happy with it . In addition , although they lose the chance to be exp...
^^
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...se the chance to be expert in that field , however they do their studies then they...
^^
Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e and can make a career in a big company , now they can only do a task on a small ...
^^
Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...they can only do a task on a small scale . In conclusion , however , the studen...
^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...task on a small scale . In conclusion , however , the student can have an exper...
^^
Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...small scale . In conclusion , however , the student can have an experience of a...
^^
Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... student can have an experience of a job , they can not be able to expert in a par...
^^
Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...be able to expert in a particular career . Every coin has two sides , a positive a...
^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...icular career . Every coin has two sides , a positive and a negative , same is fol...
^^
Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...as two sides , a positive and a negative , same is followed by having a gap in sch...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59932659933 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51011487397 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491582491582 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3636801755 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158442046275 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715907826855 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689177381654 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1160550302 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849265772973 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.