Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Other think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
People hold differing views about how integrating international cultures and business influence on each nation. While some individual believe that this movement might lead to the gradual dissolution of national characteristics, I am favor of its benefits that a country can derive from cultural exchange.
On the first hand, there are some compelling reasons proving that the international trading and cultural exchange is accountable for the continual extinction of national’s own identity, chief of which is the overwhelming popularity of one culture over the other. As a matter of fact, several cultural aspects of the powerhouse, especially the USA, have influenced the way of living of young generations in most developing countries, who come into contact with American culture such as watching movies, listening to US music or eating fast food. Because of the prolonged exposure of people at highly impressionable age, they would lose interest in practicing their national cultures. To exemplify, the Vietnamese previous generations used to put on traditional clothes as an indispensable part of cultural background, specifically on big occasions like Lunar New Year. However, these social behaviors are hardly practiced nowadays since a majority of Vietnamese opt for Western-styled clothing items in every day use as well as business meetings as social etiquettes. Therefore, the predominance of suits and jeans is blamed for traditional clothes to die out.
On the other hand, I completely hold the view that the rise in the number of multicultural countries might eminently benefit the prosperity of those nations, one of the most noticeable is the high level of cultural diversity. An explanation is that if a community gains a deeper insight into the beauty of foreign cultures, they will adopt this practice into daily life, thus their culture may not run a risk of being eroded but it can be strengthened. A case in point is that by watching American reality shows, Vietnamese entrepreneur can learn the social etiquettes of American counterparts as well as the USA business. Consequently, there would be apparent advantages for Vietnamese businessmen over their rivals as they start a partnership with American business partners in the future. This is synonymous with the fact that entrepreneur from Vietnam stand a chance of widening cultural horizon as well as driving their business to success.
In conclusion, there are two opposite schools of thought about how international integration in term of business and culture might impact on national’s own identity. From my own perspective, what a country may lose pales in comparison with the potential benefits it can gain.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 999, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...e opt for Western-styled clothing items in every day use as well as business meetings as soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39573459716 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15217987354 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582938388626 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1674085633 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.8 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1333333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163024158012 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562853571459 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513734021331 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112028157671 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512610054686 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 999, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...e opt for Western-styled clothing items in every day use as well as business meetings as soc...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39573459716 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15217987354 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582938388626 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1674085633 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.8 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1333333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163024158012 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562853571459 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513734021331 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112028157671 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512610054686 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.