Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused bu this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
Nowadays, many young people are moving to a bigger areas such as governorates and towns , which make older people living in the rural areas alone. This essay will firstly, discuss the reasons of this problem and secondly, look at the possible solutions of this issue.
In my opinion, the leaving of older people alone in the countryside is just horrible, and one of the reasons of this problem is the scarcity of job opportunities in the home town of those people which make young people unemployed and unable to pay their expenses therefore those individuals are travelling to more modernised places that contain a lot of companies that afford job opportunities and leave old people with their own. Another point is the low paid labours in the rural area which push adults to look for a higher paid job in provinces to cover all of their expenditures and push them to travel to bigger cities to find a well-paid labours causing staying of old people alone.
One of the best solutions for the scarcity of employment chances in the villages is the encouragement of private investment in those areas which can bring companies and association that could make a plenty of work vacant chances for unemployment people and contribute to stop the migration of people from villages to cities. Moreover, one of the ideas associated with solving low paid jobs in countryside is the government support for those people by giving each person an amount of money to assist him to overcome his financial status and make him stay at his home town with old people.
In conclusion, the dilemma of elderly staying alone in the countryside has to be solved by trying to attract private investors to invest in the countryside in addition to government support for young humans in the villages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ger areas such as governorates and towns , which make older people living in the r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85478547855 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68098159441 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491749174917 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.4631275124 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 210.142857143 106.682146367 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.2857142857 20.7667163134 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294865888988 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134016077123 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061466822539 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177132128092 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508924023559 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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