It is common practice for some students to take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Taking a break year after finishing school education to work or to go on a journey had become a prevalent practice. This essay will examine the pros and cons of this gapped year which is after high school graduation.
Clearly, Taking a rest year after school has several advantages like it will make up your mind because after more than 10 years studying you need to reorder your priorities. For example, when restaurants are hiring new staff so enormous amount of people are applying for this job but the restaurant's authorities prefer to go for the youth because of their age and health. As a result of their preference over the others, this encourages them to work and leave school to make money. Travelling also is a thing that school learners need to do after finishing school. Visiting another country is necessary for students because of its benefits like it will open your eye to the world.
Furthermore, the community is respecting fully educated people more than others and the world is progressing with a considerable ratio. Thus, this unused year will affect your future if you did not exploit your free time. A full year is a huge amount of wasted time. For instance, If you had traveled anywhere after school then you want to complete your studies by taking a bachelor, you will find it severe to study because of this gapped year. Hence, there are numerous turns up to make it a profitable decision.
To sum up, I need to inform you that taking a free year after schooling is your personal choice so if you take it or not, you will be responsible for your decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67857142857 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50488298639 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7050822469 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354780782286 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128988504657 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881069680695 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241990920719 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335952126208 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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