Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
With massive growing of industry, the idea of transferring factories and companies away from capital cities has become a serious issue. This essay will argue that benefits of this outweight the drawbacks. The essay will first demonstrate that regional cities are better for promotion of industry followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantage, transferring goods rises price of product, is not valid.
Firstly, yielding factories need vast spaces which are available away from crowded cities; Therefore, business owners, who are in need to expand their work, have to move to remote cities and flourish their work. Furthermore, this size expansion will provide many work places for unemployed youth. In addition, more workers and engineers will settle near their work which in turn will establish a new cities other than large urban ones. For example, Sixth of October city, that industrial city in Egypt, had been established thirty years ago by only two factories and become now one of big cities for industry in Middle East.
Secondly, there is no doubt that air pollution, resulting from industry, adversely affects people’s health. Therefore, moving these factories away from urban centres, which are people heavily settled, will maintain good quality of air. In other words, keeping overcrowded cities from hazards of pollution.
Those opposed to this essay that it causes economic burden on industry’s owners; that is because transferring goods for longer kilometres to reach customers; so, this long distance will affect the price of products. However, there is actually no evidence to support this view as also distribution of products cost as just as well in both cities.
On balance, the matter of changing place of industry to local centres leads to increase production as well as minimizing pollution; so, benefits clearly outweights the flawed argument.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, no doubt, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36486486486 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65226586978 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641891891892 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9937924056 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105764912758 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362657538607 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299820005952 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531120341856 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233744928784 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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