In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
It is astonishing that hunger and malnutrition is still prevalent in many countries whose agriculture has been undergone constant development. Although the increasing unemployment rate and the cost of agricultural products are the main cause of this, there are number of effective strategies that can be applied to tackle the problem.
The rise in unemployed people and product prices are the main reasons resulting in millions of starving bellies. As advances are brought to the agriculture, activities such as farming and harvesting of crops are now done by modern machines. This significantly reduces human labour and eventually ends up with many jobless people. Besides, climate change is another reason which is worth mentioning as it brings about the devastating consequences to the growth of crops and their yields. Hence, this poses a surge in prices of the agricultural products and results in people finding it difficult to afford the price of such food.
Since the number of hungry people is rising continually, immediate actions need to be taken into account to halt it. First, combining the contributions between conventional labour practice and technology not only reduce the unemployment rate, but also the cost of agricultural machines and eventually the product prices. Thus, this make food affordable to almost everyone. Furthermore, to maximise the productivity of crops, improvements are needed to be made in the systems that forecast extreme weather event. This is to help farmers keep track with natural disasters.
In summary, by carrying out the right methods, agricultural activities can be done cost-effectively and problems of hunger will be reduced to the minimum level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, thus, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44528301887 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05645003107 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618867924528 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5618311839 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281210388757 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861202867354 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449564164372 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16460320449 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227055906636 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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