In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
In this modern society, there have been significant breakthroughs in almost every aspect of life, and agriculture, therefore, is no exception and has considerably developed over the past few decades. However, starvation is still among one of the most popular problems in many parts of the world despite such development. This essay will outline several reasons for this issue and propose some possible solutions.
To begin with, there are a host of factors contributing to the widespread occurrence of malnutrition. Firstly, modern practices and methods in agriculture have led to the appearance of top-quality types of meat and vegetables, but they will be too costly for the vast majority. Furthermore, the products from farmers' fields do not come to customers' hands directly, but via various agents, so the overall cost will be much higher than the original. Another reason is that the amount of food produced is unmatched by the level of population growth. The 21st century witnesses an astonishing rise in population worldwide, and our agriculture has not fully developed to meet such incredible demands. Consequently, in countries which are over-populated such as India, more and more people are lacking food to survive.
Turning to the ways to overcome this problem, a possible initiative is that governments should enact laws which require a stable price for certain kinds of food. This will ensure that agricultural products are offered at a reasonable cost, thus increasing their availability to everyone. Shops or traders trying to make a profit by overpricing should be heavily fined and banned from the market for a certain amount of time so as to remind others of properly following the rules. What is more, the population boom should be strictly controlled so as to guarantee people's standards of living. In simpler terms, fewer people tend to put less of a strain on all resources, including food, and it is also easier to help them improve life quality, which means starvation is not likely to be as popular as it is now if we succeed to carry out this proposal.
To sum up, that many people don't have enough food is caused by a complex variety of reasons. Tackling the problem does require a lot of efforts of both governments and individuals, but when we truly focus on solving it and give it our best shot, I believe the issue will no longer be a serious one in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, as to, such as, to begin with, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9776119403 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85726053657 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7005759078 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0625 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189491871082 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565579653518 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388682656171 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111283346091 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491612180471 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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