In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
It is true that although many approaches are applied in in developing agriculture many residents do not have enough food to eat. There are many reasons behind this issue and some measures should be applied to tackle this problem.
There are two main reasons can explain why people are still hungry when the condition of agriculture are improved. Firstly, the increase in the population faster than the quantity of agriculture produce hence it will not provide enough food for people. Secondly, war has happend in some countries lead to sharp increase the demand about the food to serve for the war. Moreover, when war happend, inhabitants will lose their asset, so thy cannot afford for buying food. Therefore, although agriculture is applied some methods to enhance their productivity they cannot meet the demands lead to people hungry.
The government should impose some measures to deal with this issue. The authorities should apply the advance in technology to increase the productivity, so the enough food can produce for all pople all over the world. Furthermor, the nation are in the war should negotiate to bring the peace come back to help people have enough condition to buy food and reduce the dmand in the agriculture.
In conclusion, despite the devolopment of agriculture, the burst in population and war has happened are both leadt to pople still hungry. The goverment and authorities should exert some measure to mitigate this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11344537815 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64666196838 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5514885777 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.416666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207310021316 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811751109262 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071818577278 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129474476786 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497234831414 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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